Changed to a triggered ability from "Counter all spells and abilities that target the enchanted permanent unless their controllers pays ." Unsure if it I can say "counter it unless its controller pays" or if the "its" becomes an unclear antecedent and needs to be the "that spell or ability's controller" that I currently have.
If you based it on Weaver of Harmony, why not use the same wording? I feel, "from an enchantment source", makes it clear that the ability on the stack not the abilityprinted on the card is meant.
That red activated ability is so out of line. Two mana repeatable removal on an already really efficient creature with another mass removal ability and evasion?
Changed to a triggered ability from "Counter all spells and abilities that target the enchanted permanent unless their controllers pays
." Unsure if it I can say "counter it unless its controller pays" or if the "its" becomes an unclear antecedent and needs to be the "that spell or ability's controller" that I currently have.
Thanks SecretInfiltrator!
That ability doesn't work as a static ability, needs to be a triggered ability.
WotC tried and rescinded. See Erayo's Essence.
If you based it on Weaver of Harmony, why not use the same wording? I feel, "from an enchantment source", makes it clear that the ability on the stack not the abilityprinted on the card is meant.
Usually the wording would be a self-replacement effect:
It is a bit convoluted to both add "scry 1" and reduce the life loss from 2 to 1 (but not outright remove it).
I feel the design does just a little too much. For a more straightforward tribal reward design (just adjust the numbers) see Dark Vision.
I like the thematic concept.
Sure you did. ;)
reduced power from 3 to 7
Was "Draw two cards and lose two life. If you control a Citizen, Scry 1, draw two cards, and lose 1 life instead."
reduced cmc by 1
Based on Weaver of Harmony, I am unsure if this ability could be blue
Added "This ability can't target a single target more than twice each turn."
It's 1 damage now. My head wasn't where my fingers were while typing the edit description.
"
: 2 damage to a creature" to "
: 2 damage to any target" (edit description here trimmed for convenience)
That red activated ability is so out of line. Two mana repeatable removal on an already really efficient creature with another mass removal ability and evasion?
Also the edit notes say "
reduced to 
",but it now costs 
.
A cost of
or 
seems right.
Misspelled berserker
reduced to 
added "in addition to its other types"