A (terrible) example: The shaman has been blinded as a ritual to give them great power. They can call nature to defend their people; but has to be led to the battleground.
That wraps up a little self-consistent story. (No idea if it fits in your set or not, of course; it's just an example of a story that fits the mechanics)
So how do the mechanics tie into this flavor? Why is the Shaman three times the size of your average Shaman? How does this explain the attacking restriction?
A card where the name, type line, flavor text and rules text all tell a consistent story is seen more favorably. A 3/6 with a combat restriction feels more like a big beast that is hard to control than a spiritual leader pleading for their people.
Undying is a powerful ability and recurring something with such a high toughness can be problematic at common. I'd put it at uncommon or use a trick like on Sightless Ghoul to make it less of a wall.
The creature types Zombie and Skeleton thematically don't go together on the same card's typeline.
The end of the sentence seems to be missing: "... this turn."
A bend, but the kind of card that makes sense for Limited trickery. I think "can't block this turn" would be more welcome. Maybe even "can't attack or block this turn"?
yeah the rules text dont fit, will change the card
A (terrible) example: The shaman has been blinded as a ritual to give them great power. They can call nature to defend their people; but has to be led to the battleground.
That wraps up a little self-consistent story. (No idea if it fits in your set or not, of course; it's just an example of a story that fits the mechanics)
So how do the mechanics tie into this flavor? Why is the Shaman three times the size of your average Shaman? How does this explain the attacking restriction?
A card where the name, type line, flavor text and rules text all tell a consistent story is seen more favorably. A 3/6 with a combat restriction feels more like a big beast that is hard to control than a spiritual leader pleading for their people.
lol fail will edit :D <3
sure secod one
the flavor is that Masine is dying (which is not actually the elves forest, and the elder is begging nature to feed her people out of desperateness)
yeah. okay will edit.
Undying is a powerful ability and recurring something with such a high toughness can be problematic at common. I'd put it at uncommon or use a trick like on Sightless Ghoul to make it less of a wall.
The creature types Zombie and Skeleton thematically don't go together on the same card's typeline.
The end of the sentence seems to be missing: "... this turn."
A bend, but the kind of card that makes sense for Limited trickery. I think "can't block this turn" would be more welcome. Maybe even "can't attack or block this turn"?
Reverse tribal seems like a concept that will disappoint players.
I do not follow the flavor in this card.