Having a cool down to get your creative juices running again is fine. Also, going through other people's ideas can get one inspired. There are a bunch of custom card creation communities one can check up on.
Could you give us some kind of exposition as to what this card is trying to convey and/or accomplish. As it stands, it's very haphazard.
Like, it requires you to untap it, yet there are no untap effects in the set. It can pop out a Black Lotus ability, tap two creatures, and create two 1/1s of a new type of token. What's the "thing" that connects these abilities?
Turning it into an artifact made the name obviously nonsensical.
Um; that last clause isn't needed; since you had to tapp it to use it.
Given this uses your land drop; and can only be used the once - I'm not sure it needs the "Does not untap normally" clause either. ETB tapped is sensible though.
But this is very flexible. Double-tap, or two tokens; for no mana is a bit risky.
Reminds me of Ride Down and Fight to the Death. I think this would be white in most cases. I mean, it's mass Vanquish. Perhaps would be the best fit as indicated by the precedent.
Though this requires for you to have creatures so strangely it kinda could be justified in in a twisted sense. Ie. "Creatures you control gain deathtouch until end of turn." However, this would be closer to "Attacking creatures you control gain deathtouch and first strike until end of turn" and that doesn't feel right in at all.
thanks guys, hope to be making a ton soon!
4chan has /ccg/, there's usually a thread up on /tg/.
Having a cool down to get your creative juices running again is fine. Also, going through other people's ideas can get one inspired. There are a bunch of custom card creation communities one can check up on.
These are the ones I know:
I don't think ever card has to fit into an archtype in a set, if so, that isn't the smartest thing, but maybe I'm wrong.
I guess the abilities are mixmatched, don't know any alternatives
And the name is now bad i know...
ps: Im sad, im having an art block lately and cannot make new cards here D;
Could you give us some kind of exposition as to what this card is trying to convey and/or accomplish. As it stands, it's very haphazard.
Like, it requires you to untap it, yet there are no untap effects in the set. It can pop out a Black Lotus ability, tap two creatures, and create two 1/1s of a new type of token. What's the "thing" that connects these abilities?
Turning it into an artifact made the name obviously nonsensical.
aww... okay.... but.. but.... token making lands!! Fine.
Make it not be a land?
You do have to untap it somehow though, so the spell (or activated ablity) that does that would cost something....
If you have better ideas how to keep the tap options, but a way to make it not overpowered, pls tell
Um; that last clause isn't needed; since you had to tapp it to use it.
Given this uses your land drop; and can only be used the once - I'm not sure it needs the "Does not untap normally" clause either. ETB tapped is sensible though.
But this is very flexible. Double-tap, or two tokens; for no mana is a bit risky.
Will change to white
That doesn't change it at all in 2-player; limits it in multiplayer a bit.
I agree this needs a bit of flavour to make it green, where it's more naturally white. Cockatrice is good flavour for it.
It's also really really mean. But so is Overrun which will effectively be this +damage to opponent, usually.
> Destroy all blocking creatures.
Reminds me of Ride Down and Fight to the Death. I think this would be white in most cases. I mean, it's mass Vanquish. Perhaps
would be the best fit as indicated by the precedent.
Though this requires for you to have creatures so strangely it kinda could be justified in
in a twisted sense. Ie. "Creatures you control gain deathtouch until end of turn." However, this would be closer to "Attacking creatures you control gain deathtouch and first strike until end of turn" and that doesn't feel right in 
at all.
Maybe if it was more inspired by the Cockatrice?
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> Sorcery
> Destroy each creature that blocked a creature you control this turn.
Huh.