I agree completely. I was focusing on the archtype for this set, and I rather should have been thinking about the card's interactions outside this set.
would it be possible to make this a white green card?
Also, I'm new to this site, is it optional to ignore feedback, or am I supposed to change my cards for the better if told to? (I assume I can ignore genuinely unhelpful feedback)
TBH I really hate this idea I've came up with this set, i'm here because I have an addictive personality to new things.. so you're feedback could really help me make this set better. I also hate having my work edited xD
Nonetheless, im glad to be here, and thanks for the feedback :D
Sorry for the long stuff, hopefully it's not to awkward for you to reply
I'm glad to see you've joined Multiverse! I love seeing people express themselves by designing Magic cards.
A few notes on this specific card:
• Green is known for being the color that struggles most with flying. Seeing a green Bird is unusual, and seeing such an efficient, large green flying creature even more so.
• Even for green, and even if neither the base creature nor the tokens had flying, this is a lot of efficiency for just 6 mana.
• You have to specify a little more information about a token. The ability would have to read "Create three 1/1 green Bird creature tokens named Hastwook Bird that are tapped and attacking. They have ': Add to your mana pool.'".
• If it weren't for the mana ability on the tokens, this would work much better as a white card.
Can do :D
I agree completely. I was focusing on the archtype for this set, and I rather should have been thinking about the card's interactions outside this set.
Thanks :D
thank you ;D <3
could i make it azorius?
oop sorry double post, bad internet xD
These tokens are supposed to be red-green...
Their progenitor is also red-green.. SO im confused what you meant by them not belonging in mono-green?
Is the efficiency bad? If so, how should I change it?
These tokens are supposed to be red-green...
Their progenitor is also red-green.. SO im confused what you meant by them not belonging in mono-green?
Is the efficiency bad? If so, how should I change it?
would it be possible to make this a white green card?
Also, I'm new to this site, is it optional to ignore feedback, or am I supposed to change my cards for the better if told to? (I assume I can ignore genuinely unhelpful feedback)
TBH I really hate this idea I've came up with this set, i'm here because I have an addictive personality to new things.. so you're feedback could really help me make this set better. I also hate having my work edited xD
Nonetheless, im glad to be here, and thanks for the feedback :D
Sorry for the long stuff, hopefully it's not to awkward for you to reply
Bird creatures should already have flying. :P
This is extremely efficient for its cost, especially since the activated ability has no mana cost and can be activated the turn this ETBs.
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This is a cool card concept. I think it if it fits into one color, though, it's green. It should probably be and have a CMC of at least 6, though.
This needs to provide the stats, colors, and abilities of the token it creates.
I think this could drop "token" from the restriction, to give it a broader appeal.
That's a really neat ability on the back side of this.
This is interesting. It's awfully strong for 2 CMC, though I like how you've balanced that a bit by not giving the creature haste.
Stealing creatures doesn't belong in white: this should be blue or red.
These tokens make their progenitor extremely efficient. Their tap ability doesn't quite belong in mono green, either.
I'm glad to see you've joined Multiverse! I love seeing people express themselves by designing Magic cards.
A few notes on this specific card:
• Green is known for being the color that struggles most with flying. Seeing a green Bird is unusual, and seeing such an efficient, large green flying creature even more so.
• Even for green, and even if neither the base creature nor the tokens had flying, this is a lot of efficiency for just 6 mana. • You have to specify a little more information about a token. The ability would have to read "Create three 1/1 green Bird creature tokens named Hastwook Bird that are tapped and attacking. They have ': Add to your mana pool.'".
• If it weren't for the mana ability on the tokens, this would work much better as a white card.