This card was misworded, I forgot that as the enchantments controller this would sacrifice at the end of your turn, not the opponents. Changed it to be your upkeep instead of end step, giving the opponent a turn to respond. Also made the cost more expensive to warrant this.
Yeah, that first line was redundant. This is semi-relevant and helps prevent confusion because there are a few cards in this set that exile killed creatures instead of graveyarding them. Common seems really good for this. Notably, these creatures get to use on death effects and ETB effects a second time, which is an upgrade over indestructible. Moving to uncommon for now
Well, "die" and "be sent to the graveyard" mean exactly the same thing in Magic-ese, so you can remove the second one and have functionally identical text.
Name and effect makes me think a little more white than black, but color-wise this is fine.
This reminds me of Lingering Death quite a bit except for the fact that the creature is sacrificed at the end of your turn rather on the creature's controller's turn.
Wouldn't it be cleaner to just have this as a sorcery with "Destroy target creature unless its controller pays "? That would be good but not too "op" at I think.
After removing the old "Barren" mechanic from this card, I honestly still think this design is great. Moving it back to Lazando for now.
Changed to sorcery speed, adding a counter instead of end of turn effect, and removed the cantriping.
Changed this out for a crummy weakened version of lifelink. Still fits the theme, but not anywhere near as strong now.
Changed to add a bit more value and moved to sorcery speed. Might be too strong now, making a note for if playtesting ever happens.
This card was misworded, I forgot that as the enchantments controller this would sacrifice at the end of your turn, not the opponents. Changed it to be your upkeep instead of end step, giving the opponent a turn to respond. Also made the cost more expensive to warrant this.
Yeah, that first line was redundant. This is semi-relevant and helps prevent confusion because there are a few cards in this set that exile killed creatures instead of graveyarding them. Common seems really good for this. Notably, these creatures get to use on death effects and ETB effects a second time, which is an upgrade over indestructible. Moving to uncommon for now
Well, "die" and "be sent to the graveyard" mean exactly the same thing in Magic-ese, so you can remove the second one and have functionally identical text.
Name and effect makes me think a little more white than black, but color-wise this is fine.
Rare seems too much, more common.
This reminds me of Lingering Death quite a bit except for the fact that the creature is sacrificed at the end of your turn rather on the creature's controller's turn.
Wouldn't it be cleaner to just have this as a sorcery with "Destroy target creature unless its controller pays
"? That would be good but not too "op" at 
I think.