Recent updates to Deshub: (Generated at 2024-04-19 14:25:36)
Named the card
Main phase? How about just
> Activate this ability only any time you could cast a sorcery.
Gave the card a name
type updated to jackal
gave it a name
The last one.
Both of those are great names. I'm leaning towards Fatal Depression on this as it feels more in-line with a creature possibly dying. Thank you!
This is a lot of text for something that just exiles a few cards from various libraries and has little chance for setup.
This could easily just be "Target player exiles the top four cards of his or her library." Bam! Simplicity.
Fatal Depression? Unresolved Issues?
Algebra is a really complex keyword. Actually if all you do is reveal the cards/spot the permanents without any looting/drawing you got plenty going on.
The reminder text alone might be eight lines. Is it longer than the suspend reminder text?
Is this supposed to be a triggered ability, a targeting restriction or a granted static ability that works only during combat?
I am aware of the functional difference in multiplayer, but I personally think this would be worded better if it went for Needle Drop wording:
"..., ~ deals 3 damage to target opponent that has lost life this turn."
token is now 0/1 instead of 0/2
increased from +2/+2 to +3/+3
Named the card
Named the card
Main phase? How about just
> Activate this ability only any time you could cast a sorcery.
Gave the card a name
type updated to jackal
gave it a name
The last one.
Both of those are great names. I'm leaning towards Fatal Depression on this as it feels more in-line with a creature possibly dying. Thank you!
This is a lot of text for something that just exiles a few cards from various libraries and has little chance for setup.
This could easily just be "Target player exiles the top four cards of his or her library." Bam! Simplicity.
Fatal Depression? Unresolved Issues?
Algebra is a really complex keyword. Actually if all you do is reveal the cards/spot the permanents without any looting/drawing you got plenty going on.
The reminder text alone might be eight lines. Is it longer than the suspend reminder text?
Is this supposed to be a triggered ability, a targeting restriction or a granted static ability that works only during combat?
I am aware of the functional difference in multiplayer, but I personally think this would be worded better if it went for Needle Drop wording:
"..., ~ deals 3 damage to target opponent that has lost life this turn."
token is now 0/1 instead of 0/2
increased from +2/+2 to +3/+3