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CardName: Tah'wir, Prince of Weh'jed Cost: 2WW Type: Planeswalker - Tah'wir Pow/Tgh: /3 Rules Text: [+1] At the beginning of your next upkeep, you may choose a creature that dealt damage to you or a planeswalker you control since your last turn, then exile that creature. [-2] You may return a card exiled by Tah'wir, Prince of Weh'jed onto the battlefield under your control. [-8] Exile all permanents. Then return all permanent cards from exile to the battlefield under your control. Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Al-Weh'jed Mythic
Tah'wir, Prince of Weh'jed
  +1 At the beginning of your next upkeep, you may choose a creature that dealt damage to you or a planeswalker you control since your last turn, then exile that creature.
-2 You may return a card exiled by Tah'wir, Prince of Weh'jed onto the battlefield under your control. -8 Exile all permanents. Then return all permanent cards from exile to the battlefield under your control. 3
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Suggested wording:
> "At the beginning of your next upkeep, you may choose a creature that dealt damage to you or a planeswalker you control since your last turn, then exile that creature."
> "Return target creature card from exile to the battlefield under your control."
> "Exile all permanents. Then return all permanent cards from exile to the battlefield under your control."
Also, wow, um, that ultimate is absolutely insane. More game-winning than most planeswalker ultimates. Admittedly you need to tick up 5 turns to get there... but the +1 is a very effective defence, much more so than Jace, Architect of Thought's defensive +1. I fear this planeswalker as he currently is would need to cost at least 5 mana, perhaps 6.
Returning any creature from exile is supposed to be no-no territory. I would suggest for the second ability a clause about it being a creature exiled by Tah'wir.
I'm with Sorrow. That second ability is a definite faux pas. Also, the ultimate is very, very blue.