This is very interesting. Collectively, it looks like it's the right colors, but it ends up feeling very much like a black card.
By they way, you clauses interfere with each other. The first ability, a static ability, makes it so that the second ability, a replacement effect, never happens. You need to eliminate the first ability if you want the second to function. It would still prevent players from gaining life.
I feel like that art is fairly unlikely to exist outside of a specific request for it.
"If a player would gain life, you may draw a card instead."
This is very interesting. Collectively, it looks like it's the right colors, but it ends up feeling very much like a black card.
By they way, you clauses interfere with each other. The first ability, a static ability, makes it so that the second ability, a replacement effect, never happens. You need to eliminate the first ability if you want the second to function. It would still prevent players from gaining life.
this is kind of boring, so I replaced it with a new card.