It's possible I should avoid this kind of design as its potentially confusing whether or not the ability triggers when the first rebel dies. In other words, does the ability trigger when you have no rebels in your graveyard and then a rebel dies.

Modified the effect to hopefully make it more clear how the effect works. The first Rebel dying will no longer trigger this creature.

This looks... "overly developed". Couldn't it just be

> Whenever ~ or another Rebel you control dies, each opponent...

?

Your proposed effect plays very differently from the existing design.

The existing design is spun out of my existing mechanical identity for Rebels, caring about rebels in the graveyard. Mechanically, my Rebel design is a threshold build around while your design is a linear build around. From a flavor perspective, the idea here is that dead rebels become martyrs which inspires rebels to action.

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