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Plain

CardName: Plains Cost: Type: Basic Land - Plains Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: ({T}: Produce {W}. Unused mana is lost.) Flavour Text: After the coming of the Sun rich grass arose there, and while Angband was besieged and its gates shut there were green things even among the pits and broken rocks before the doors of hell. Set/Rarity: Silmarillion: The War of the Jewels Basic

Plains

Basic Land – Plains

(: Produce . Unused mana is lost.)

After the coming of the Sun rich grass arose there, and while Angband was besieged and its gates shut there were green things even among the pits and broken rocks before the doors of hell.

Illus. Paul Scott Canavan

Updated on 31 Jul 2017 by Tahazzar

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2017-03-25 13:55:14: Tahazzar created the card Plains

2017-04-19 19:06:40: Tahazzar edited Plains:

Testing out the new "get mana" format.

2017-05-19 09:37:42: Tahazzar edited Plains:

"you get" -> "it produces"

by SecretInfiltrator:

Too much text. I really like the idea to put flavor text on basic lands - liked it since I first read about the idea on the MtGS forums - but you don't want to throw aesthetics into the wind.

This is a wall of text. As a rule of thumb your basic land with flavor text shouldn't be red-flagged for text size for commons (knowing that flavor text usually would be ignored for this).

In this case I'd say the last part "[A]nd while Angband [...]" would be enough.

by amuseum:

or stretch the flavor text over several cards. since it's assumed multiple versions of basic lands per block.

by Vitenka:

That works; assuming you didn't alreayd have another two nice bits of flaour you wanted to put on lands.

This one even conveniently splits into three parts.

2017-06-11 20:04:57: Tahazzar edited Plains:

Shortened the flavor text.

2017-07-31 11:38:00: Tahazzar edited Plains:

"This produces" -> "produce"

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