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CardName: Cortraevas Citizen Cost: {1} Type: Artifact Creature - Citizen Pow/Tgh: 1/1 Rules Text: Slag (If this creature would die, put it on the bottom of your library. When you do, put a +1/+1 counter on target artifact creature you control.) Flavour Text: Cortraevas Set/Rarity: temporary storage Common |
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Having a keyword that requires shuffling is a huge red flag. Maybe bottom of the library, if you're looking to avoid recursion
Valid. That would keep the idea and feel.
Old version of Slag "Slag (When this creature dies Shuffle it into your library and put a +1/+1 counter on up to one target artifact creature." replaced with going to the bottom (and technical rewording)
You can't have a target inside a replacement effect. I think they allow reflexive triggers though, so if you really want to avoid death triggers,
> If this creature would die, put it on the bottom of your library. When you do, put a +1/+1 counter on target artifact [creature] you control.
This feels more like an ability word to me. Slag could be the bottom of library part, but I'd like to have other options than just a counter. The flavor is obviously augmenting other artifacts, but maybe have other buffs at uncommon and higher? (More +1/+1 counters, keyword counters, temp effects, etc)
Updated and corrected to dude1818's wording