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Suggest putting it on the bottom of library instead?
I had a go at fixing the mechanic syntax for you.
Note that cycling is probably a better version of redo. A shuffle is a time-consuming operation, especially in tournaments.
fix mechanic wording
As written, this card doesn't require you to exile anything to draw those two cards. You could just play this on round 3 as an instant speed Divination. Writing "...three target cards..." would change that, though.
Just a little fix on wording maybe;
As an additional cost to cast ~, exile three cards from your graveyard.
Draw 2 cards.
I wouldn't say that mill and discard are quite the same. It's not like milling 1 is a real drawback. This is still balanced, compared to Distress.
Suggest putting it on the bottom of library instead?
I had a go at fixing the mechanic syntax for you.
Note that cycling is probably a better version of redo. A shuffle is a time-consuming operation, especially in tournaments.
fix mechanic wording
As written, this card doesn't require you to exile anything to draw those two cards. You could just play this on round 3 as an instant speed Divination. Writing "...three target cards..." would change that, though.
Just a little fix on wording maybe;
As an additional cost to cast ~, exile three cards from your graveyard.
Draw 2 cards.
I wouldn't say that mill and discard are quite the same. It's not like milling 1 is a real drawback. This is still balanced, compared to Distress.