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CardName: Tunnel Focus Cost: W Type: Insntat Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: Target creature gets +1/+1 and gains first strike until end of turn. Fable (If this spell targets a legendary or renowned permanent, you may return it to its owner's library third from the top as it resolves.) Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Design Dump Common |
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Putting something onto your library to be able to cast it again prevents you from drawing cards, so this mechanic has tension towards repetetive game state. :(
The other weakness of this card design is that you clearly want to put it into a set with renown, yet renown uses +1/+1 counters as memory aides which is clearly undermined by tis spell arbitrarily distributing them.
Patron of the Valiant e. g. cleverly puts the counters only on creatures that already have counters, so it doesn't undermine the memory function of +1/+1 counters. Only one card in Magic Origins can put +1/+1 counters on an arbitrary creature card (most put the counter on themselves) - and even that one only at uncommon if a special condition is met.
If you ask me the counter is what you want to restrict to renowned permanents - if you restrict it to creatures that could work.
I posted this exact card on another custom card site six months ago and no one said a word. Thanks for pointing it out.
In regards to repetitive game state, it was suppose to be a less problematic version of buyback. I knew the draw prevention might've been an issue, but I believed it being a "may" ability would've mitigated that somewhat. I'll change it from 'top of the library' to 'third from the top' for now.
Alternatively, I could go 'If this spell targets a legendary or renowned permanent, copy it if it was cast. You may choose different targets for the copy.' But I'd want to change the ability name if I did that.
Hmm. Possibilities - just shuffle it back into your deck? Not as good as being near the top; but also less repetitive.
Or maybe somehow exile attached to the thing; and allowed to recast on that thing only?
I kinda like the flavour though.
(Regarding comments - it it's not the most recent change in a cardset, chances are I won't see it.)