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CardName: Manufactured Loyalty Cost: 2 Type: Artifact Creature - Construct Pow/Tgh: 2/1 Rules Text: Unity - (When Manufactured Loyalty attacks, reveal the top card of your library, if it has unity, put it into your hand) When Manufactured Loyalty attacks, if another attacking creature has unity, if Manufactured Loyalty dies this turn, draw a card. Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Fall of the Magnolia Common

Manufactured Loyalty

Artifact Creature – Construct

Unity – (When Manufactured Loyalty attacks, reveal the top card of your library, if it has unity, put it into your hand)

When Manufactured Loyalty attacks, if another attacking creature has unity, if Manufactured Loyalty dies this turn, draw a card.

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Updated on 28 Aug 2017 by mace20

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2017-08-20 00:19:11: mace20 created the card Manufactured Loyalty

2017-08-20 00:23:06: mace20 edited Manufactured Loyalty

by dude1818:

That's an unfortunately nested ability. Also, since unity is an ability word, you can't actually check to see if something has it. It's basically flavor text.

by mace20:

then how do you suggest I edit the wording?

by Vitenka:

Personally, I'd ditch the attacking requirement:
When ~ dies, if you control another creature with Unity, you may draw a card.

Or maybe:
As long as you control another creature with Unity - when ~ dies, you may draw a card.

But heck; why not go big:
Whenever at least two creatures with unity attack - draw a card.

by dude1818:

My concern is that unity needs be an actual keyword, which means it needs to do something by itself (even if it's just a marker like devoid).

2017-08-20 22:38:08: mace20 edited Manufactured Loyalty

2017-08-28 21:58:53: mace20 edited Manufactured Loyalty

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