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CardName: Ridian Shore Cost: Type: Land Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: Ridian Shore enters the battlefield tapped. Whenever a permanent you control becomes the target of a spell or ability Ridian Shore becomes a 2/2 unblockable elemental creature until end of turn, it's still a land. {T}: Add {U} to your mana pool Flavour Text: " The Ridian people knows the shores and seas as good as their blades knows their way to our eye sockets. - Saying about Ridian warriors. " Set/Rarity: Flames of Ardor Common Ridian Shore enters the battlefield tapped.
Whenever a permanent you control becomes the target of a spell or ability Ridian Shore becomes a 2/2 unblockable elemental creature until end of turn, it's still a land.  : Add  to your mana pool" The Ridian people knows the shores and seas as good as their blades knows their way to our eye sockets. – Saying about Ridian warriors. "
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Code: CL02 History: [-] Add your comments: |
Changed Flavor text grammar.
changed to unblockable, was to powerful.
The text here is tiny, indicating that these are too over-stuffed with words. It's very rare for a common cycle of lands to get flavour text, because having tiny text on lands is not a good idea. I fear you may have to either move the flavour text to other cards, or drastically simplify the ability.
You can also lose the blank line between the second and third abilities. All major browsers now display a gap after each paragraph of text, so there's no need for blank lines; all they do is force the text size to be even smaller. The same applies to CL04 Oilfang Marsh, CL03 Anabaya Glades and CL05 Onyxsea Plateau.