So I can't come up with a good name for the life of me. I thought it would be neat if red could penalize artifact creatures when fighting as a way to reflect red's artifact hate. I debated on only reducing the power of the artifact creature, but I figured since red can just destroy artifact that I may as well allow red to reduce to toughness, since the artifact could be destroyed in the fight. I remember a red card allowing you to target two creatures for fight without having to control one, but I can't remember the name. EDIT: Blood Feud. I thought Blood Feud had cost , so this has an upside, but hopefully that upside is narrow enough to not be a problem?

Hmm, you probably want to switch the order of effects. "Choose two target creatures. If you target an artifact creature, it gets -2/-2 until end of turn. Then those creatures fight." Note that SBAs aren't checked during the resolution, so even if you target a 10/2 artifact, it'll still fight as an 8/0.

Also: flavor text is missing a word.

That's actually kind of funny. I could see red raging out and totally trying to beat up something that was going to be dead because it was at 0 toughness.