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CardName: Burai Type-10 Cost: R Type: Artifact - Equipment Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: Equipped creature gets +2/+1. Eject (If equipped creature would be destroyed, instead remove all damage from it and destroy this Equipment.) Equip {2} Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Code Geass Common |
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As mentioned on Glasgow RPI-11, the Burai is a Japanese version of the Glasgow RPI-11 which is basically exactly the same. The idea is that this technology has different names on the Japanese and Britannian factions but works exactly the same.
In order to not have two cards that are exactly identical except for colour, I made this
-cost-
-equip where the Glasgow is 
-cost-
-equip.
add Squad as on Glasgow RP-11; +2/+1 -> +1/+1
This seems incredibly complex for a common.
Aye, you're right (whoever you are). This is one of the options I'm considering for the way the mecha work, but introducing two new keywords on the same set of commons is definitely a red flag.
It's probably less complex if you've played with commons like Eel Umbra and Howling Wolf, as Eject and Squad are very similar to those effects. But for new players, yeah, this is certainly a lot of words.
add full card render for assessment of text size
squad is way too wordy: remove it
remove "nonequipped"
standardise ability order: static, triggered, activated