CardName: Orion, Vengeant Rebel
Cost: {1}{U}{R}{G}
Type: Legendary Creature - Human
Pow/Tgh: 2/4
Rules Text: Brutal (If this creature would deal damage to a creature
with higher power or toughness, it deals double that damage
instead.)
Whenever a creature dealt damage by Orion, Vengeant Rebel
dies this turn, you may draw two cards. If you do, discard a
card.
Flavour Text:
Set/Rarity: Mounting Misfortune Rare
Orion, Vengeant Rebel
R
Legendary Creature – Human
Brutal (If this creature would deal damage to a creature with higher power or toughness, it deals double that damage instead.) Whenever a creature dealt damage by Orion, Vengeant Rebel dies this turn, you may draw two cards. If you do, discard a card.
One thing is I don't know if you meant to write this as "Whenever a creature dealt damage by Orion, Vengeant Rebel this turn dies, [...]" but if so: you switched 'this turn' and 'dies'
Because, whenever a creature dies it will always be this turn, when it does... The issue with that is it leads to memory issues. It's pretty hard to remember every single character that was damaged by a specific card in play, especially considering Magic has a clean-up step (unlike, say Hearthstone, where damage isn't removed)...
I strongly suggest you word it that way. You might have intended to originally, though.
Anyway, pretty cool card. It's probably not Overpowered but it's definitely powerful. Well-done :)
Side note; have you considered giving him a class type? Maybe rogue? Or if you're feeling wild, maybe rebel?
Cool card! Love the mechanic!
One thing is I don't know if you meant to write this as "Whenever a creature dealt damage by Orion, Vengeant Rebel this turn dies, [...]" but if so: you switched 'this turn' and 'dies'
Because, whenever a creature dies it will always be this turn, when it does... The issue with that is it leads to memory issues. It's pretty hard to remember every single character that was damaged by a specific card in play, especially considering Magic has a clean-up step (unlike, say Hearthstone, where damage isn't removed)...
I strongly suggest you word it that way. You might have intended to originally, though.
Anyway, pretty cool card. It's probably not Overpowered but it's definitely powerful. Well-done :)
Side note; have you considered giving him a class type? Maybe rogue? Or if you're feeling wild, maybe rebel?