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I've got no objections to shortening the wording. Dude1818's suggestion would fit the best.
I considered jmgariepy's suggestion, but no adequate verb comes to mind as I'm using Unconscious as a noun.
A side note that I hope doesn't come off as me just piling on: I like the word 'Unconscious' but I get the impression that you'd get more space if you made the keyword a keyword action.
Let's say the keyword was 'Sleep'. Instead of "If Grasp Conclusions is Unconscious when it enters the graveyard..." you could instead write "When Grasp Conclusions sleeps..." It would be much tighter over multiple cards that way.
It looks like all the unconscious cards have the same effect when triggered. The whole ability could probably be in the keyword, as "You may discard this card as you cast a spell with a different name and the same mana value. When you do, each player copies this card and may cast the copy without paying its mana cost."
Oof. Wordy wordy words words.
How about replacing that last very long sentence with "When you discard ~ [with its unconscious ability], each player may cast a copy of it"?
That's a novel for a fairly simply effect
So you cast a Brainstorm. You may discard Our Wrath as you cast Brainstorm. Discarding Our Wrath this way makes it Unconscious.
Admittedly, I've tinkered with the wording a few times, and I'm guessing Return to Possibility would have the most correct and clear wording of how this should work.
What would the point be of making the spell ability and triggered ability separate paragraphs? I ask this because my logic of what seemed easiest for reading and what I would expect to see made the spell ability and Unconscious version thought that the single paragraph was more sensible.
What does "~ is unconscious" mean? That it was discarded with the first ability? Or that another card was discarded with a similar ability to it?
Note, that italizing "unconscious" means it's an ability word and cannot be referenced by mechanics.
What's exactly the point of making the spell ability and triggered ability a single paragraph together?
No idea if this too good or hot garbador.
Geez, this is sad. Why do I do this?
Unsure if the sliding power scale says
kill any creature or planeswalker is too strong currently. Probably too good because of Unconscious. Making 
should be safe?