Thank you for the assist - I want the card to be conditional - I used your wording but changed the condition to when the creature becomes tapped - if the pump is permanent my feeling is that it would be to powerfull
I'm not sure why you would want this to trigger during each player's upkeep. Why not just write it as:
"If enchanted creature is black, it gets +1/+1 for each Swamp you control. Otherwise, it gets -1/-1 for each Swamp you control."
Granted, that doesn't get rid of a blocker or let you swing with a big creature on the turn you play this card, but I'm not sure why those things were positives. On a separate sidenote, Quag Sickness cost . This seems better than that card, if you don't count the one turn delay. Granted, Quag Sickness was a common... but removal isn't often better when you increase it's rarity.
Thank you for the assist - I want the card to be conditional - I used your wording but changed the condition to when the creature becomes tapped - if the pump is permanent my feeling is that it would be to powerfull
I'm not sure why you would want this to trigger during each player's upkeep. Why not just write it as:
"If enchanted creature is black, it gets +1/+1 for each Swamp you control. Otherwise, it gets -1/-1 for each Swamp you control."
Granted, that doesn't get rid of a blocker or let you swing with a big creature on the turn you play this card, but I'm not sure why those things were positives. On a separate sidenote, Quag Sickness cost
. This seems better than that card, if you don't count the one turn delay. Granted, Quag Sickness was a common... but removal isn't often better when you increase it's rarity.
The wording seems off (is there a shorter way to word what the card does)
Reminiscent of Alpha Status.
Note that this is twice as expensive as Burden of Guilt both to cast and to use.