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CardName: Sleepless Etchings Cost: B Type: Sorcery Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: You lose 2 life. Create three colorless Monument artifact tokens. (They have no abilities.) Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Wilds of Muraganda Uncommon

Sleepless Etchings

Sorcery

You lose 2 life.
Create three colorless Monument artifact tokens. (They have no abilities.)

Updated on 07 Feb 2017 by WOM Devign Team

Code: UB07

History: [-]

2016-12-05 10:06:10: WOM Devign Team created the card Sleepless Etchings

2017-01-08 20:08:02: WOM Devign Team edited Sleepless Etchings:

Renamed to "Sleepless Etchings"

2017-01-09 12:23:07: WOM Devign Team edited Sleepless Etchings:

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2017-02-07 16:13:07: WOM Devign Team edited Sleepless Etchings:

Templating (approximated from Raise The Alarm/Night's Whisper)

by WOM Devign Team:

You killed the 1,2,3 aesthetic progression :p
But seriously, that can be an important consideration. If these are supposed to be separate sentences, let's swap the order.

--CF

by WOM Devign Team:

Sounds good to me.

I just came to the "separate sentences" conclusion because cards like Night's Whisper etc. are never worded simply "lose 2 life," and always include the "you," whereas "you create X tokens" is not a valid wording, which makes "You lose 2 life and create three colorless tokens" dubious. It's also sad that the number of tokens created is spelled out, which necessitates 1, 2, three rather than 1,2,3.

-CMC-

by WOM Devign Team:

Ah, right. Good catch with you vs not you.

--CF

2017-02-07 21:59:52: WOM Devign Team edited Sleepless Etchings:

order swapped

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