CardName: Deadwurm Dreadnaught
Cost: 3brg
Type: Artifact Creature - Skeleton Wurm Construct
Pow/Tgh: 2/2
Rules Text: {T}, Sacrifice a creature: Put 3 +1/+1 counters on Deadwurm
Dreadnaught.
{T}, Sacrifice an artifact: Deadwurm Dreadnaught deals
damage equal to its power to target creature.
{T}, Sacrifice Deadwurm Dreadnaught: Draw cards equal to
Deadwurm Dreadnaught's power.
Flavour Text:
Set/Rarity: Lev's Core Set Rare
Deadwurm Dreadnaught
R
Artifact Creature – Skeleton Wurm Construct
, Sacrifice a creature: Put 3 +1/+1 counters on Deadwurm Dreadnaught.
, Sacrifice an artifact: Deadwurm Dreadnaught deals damage equal to its power to target creature.
, Sacrifice Deadwurm Dreadnaught: Draw cards equal to Deadwurm Dreadnaught's power.
You should probably change the first two abilities so you can only sacrifice another creature or artifact you control.
Also when counting multiple +1/+1 counters, the number is usually a word number. example "Three +1/+1 counters".
This is a very cool and powerful card.
I would give it haste so it can actually use one of its abilities on the first turn so your opponent cant just immediately destroy it.
You should probably change the first two abilities so you can only sacrifice another creature or artifact you control. Also when counting multiple +1/+1 counters, the number is usually a word number. example "Three +1/+1 counters". This is a very cool and powerful card. I would give it haste so it can actually use one of its abilities on the first turn so your opponent cant just immediately destroy it.
The haste comment is true of literally every creature. Don't give it haste, it already looks pushed