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CardName: Whirlpull Cost: 2U Type: Instant Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: If one or more cards have been put on the bottom of a library this turn, put target non-land permanent on top of its owner’s library. Otherwise, return that permanent to its owner’s hand. Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Toakoa Common

Whirlpull

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If one or more cards have been put on the bottom of a library this turn, put target non-land permanent on top of its owner’s library. Otherwise, return that permanent to its owner’s hand.

Updated on 05 Nov 2018 by Fletch

Code: CU02

History: [-]

2018-10-20 22:22:46: Fletch created the card Whirlpull

2018-10-20 22:24:32: Fletch edited Whirlpull

2018-11-03 22:52:27: Fletch edited Whirlpull

by Tahazzar:

Umm, I at least had to read that second sentence a couple of times to get it so perhaps this is not a fitting card for a common. Cool flavor though. The "nonland" restriction doesn't seem that necessary. Reminds me of Consign to Dream.

Suggested wording:

> Return target permanent to its owner's hand. If one or more cards have been put on the bottom of a library this turn, put that permanent on top of its owner's library instead.

I would also consider moving the effect around so as to make it clear that two things aren't really related.

> If one or more cards have been put on the bottom of a library this turn, put target permanent on top of its owner's library. Otherwise, return that permanent to its owner's hand.

by Fletch:

I like your wording (apart from dropping “non-”), but now I wonder if the card just in general punishes someone who had to Trek on turn 2 or 3 a little too much. Might have to change the “on top of library” part.

2018-11-05 05:57:31: Fletch edited Whirlpull

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