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CardName: Cognitive Strain Cost: {2}{U} Type: Enchantment Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: At the beginning of each player's upkeep, if he or she has three or fewer cards in hand, that player puts the top seven cards of his or her library into his or her graveyard. Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: LibraryPlane Rare |
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I'm not sure about the templating here.
Looks perfect to me. (Apart from the misplaced apostrophe.) You could make the second "he or she" instead read "that player", but either works.
yeah change 2nd "he or she" to "that player" and third & fourth "he or she" to "their" to cut down the wordcount. True it only cuts it from 35 to 31 (you left "or her" off the last instance of it) but each word saved is good.
No, proper templating doesn't use "their". It's controversial whether that's incorrect or not, but Magic templating avoids that controversy by always saying "his or her".
I like the design here.
Thanks for the help.