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CardName: Khyvrix Nil, Lord Guardian Cost: 2RRW Type: Legendary Creature - Dragon Cleric Pow/Tgh: 4/4 Rules Text: Flying, Vigilance, Invincible (This creature cannot be dealt damage by other creatures during combat.) Whenever you deal combat damage on your turn, draw a card. {R/W}: Khyvrix Nil, Lord Guardian gains +1/+0 until end of turn and you gain 1 life. Flavour Text: “The only thing comparable to the magnitude of Nil’s heroism is the size of his ego.” -Jahrzz Rolgh Set/Rarity: Mahdrahx Mythic Flying, Vigilance, Invincible (This creature cannot be dealt damage by other creatures during combat.)
Whenever you deal combat damage on your turn, draw a card. ![]() “The only thing comparable to the magnitude of Nil’s heroism is the size of his ego.”
-Jahrzz Rolgh 4/4
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I think you went little overboard with the color intensity in the mana cost. It also pronounces the spacing issue that comes with a name of that length. If you try the card out in Magic Set Editor you'll see that the name gets squished.
Why is there one more
in the cost compared to
? It's one of those things that will really irk people. How much different would it really be if this costed 



instead?
I was imagining 'invincible' would be something much more powerful than what I found in the mechanics page
:/ It's kind of "meh" IMO.
For the pseudo-firebreathing ability the lifegain part feels a bit redundant since the creature already has lifelink by default.
The idea was to give it “lightning helix-breathing” with the tap ability.
Lifelink is redundant (gaining 10 life a turn with it stacking on top of the breath is silly fun), but it felt like the card had too little on it to justify the mythic rarity without it. First strike is mostly useless with invincible already on the card and haste is I think too powerful. Any other ideas?
Was def not thinking about spacing when it came to the mana cost and the name, will probably delete the “the” and reduce the cost to 2RRW. The unbalanced color intensity is flavor based, since dragons are the red iconic creature and the character (there will hopefully be a fic to go along with the set when its done #shamelessplug) is definitely more red than he is white.