Oskaria the Recurred World: Cardlist | Visual spoiler | Export | Booster | Comments | Search | Recent activity |
CardName: Jane, Rebel Vanguard Cost: {3}{R}{R} Type: Legendary Creature - Orc Rebel Pow/Tgh: */3 Rules Text: **Flagbearer** (all opponent spells that "target" one or more creatures must have this card as one of their targets) Jane, Rebel Vanguard's power is equal to the number of Rebel creatures you control. As long as you control 4 or more Rebel creatures, Jane has **Indestructible** Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Oskaria the Recurred World None |
History: [-] Add your comments: |
Your line breaks are all over the place. There shouldn't be more than one between the keyword's reminder text and the next paragraph, but there should be one between the characteristcs-defining ability that sets the power and the static ability that conditionally grants indestructible.
I am a proponent of flagbearer abilities belonging in red in addition to - maybe even more so than - in white, so this is a nice twist (I assume the Boros symbol marks a red-white faction).
The pieces on this design don't necessary all fall into place perfectly, but they form neat patterns e. g. the synergy between flagbearer and indestructible as well as the fact that this become indestructible once its power become greater than its toughness.
I'm not a fan of the name - partly certainly because this wouldn't have the Juggernaut creature type.