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CardName: Ravenous Jiangshi Cost: 1B Type: Creature - Zombie Pow/Tgh: 2/2 Rules Text: When Ravenous Jiangshi enters the battlefield, you may exile target creature card from a graveyard. Flavour Text: Half-hopping, half-shambling, always hungry. Set/Rarity: Xianlu Common

Ravenous Jiangshi
{1}{b}
 
 C 
Creature – Zombie
When Ravenous Jiangshi enters the battlefield, you may exile target creature card from a graveyard.
Half-hopping, half-shambling, always hungry.
2/2
Updated on 11 Jan 2018 by Mal

Code: CB04

History: [-]

2017-11-20 02:15:33: Mal created the card Ravenous Jiangshi
2018-01-11 05:57:56: Mal edited Ravenous Jiangshi:

2/1 -> 2/2. Giving black a little more bulk.

It's weird how quickly colors go from "Doesn't get a 2/2 for 1C" to "Let's give it something better than a 2/2 for 1C".

It's fine though. Despite my observation I think this is a good card mechanically.

Needs flavor text - make the casual visitor of your world know things better.

This is an example of a card, where using an unfamiliar term makes you uncertain what the card is. Is Jiangshi a race of undead? Is it a profession like mythical garbage disposal specialist? Is it a proper name? (If you just hear the name, will you assume it's a generic creature or a proper character and hence maybe a legendary?)

Wouldn't the name "Jiangshi Corpseeater" set up a more accurate expectation than "Corpse-Eater Jiangshi"?

2018-01-11 16:51:21: Mal edited Ravenous Jiangshi:

Name & Flavor Text.

That's a good point, one that I've admittedly been thinking about less and less as the set design goes on.

Hopefully this combination of name and flavor text is a bit more understandable.

Are there any other terms or names that you guys find confusing or not understandable?

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