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CardName: Way Station Massacre Cost: 4RR Type: Sorcery Pow/Tgh: / Rules Text: Target player sacrifices three non-basic lands. Way Station Massacre deals 3 damage to each creature that player controls. Flavour Text: When Pale Tarkot destroyed the Darrowhill Waystation in a psychotic rage, Melia Thames was among the dead. Her brother Serix was deeply affected. Set/Rarity: Soradyne Laboratories v1.2 Rare

Way Station Massacre

Sorcery

Target player sacrifices three non-basic lands. Way Station Massacre deals 3 damage to each creature that player controls.

When Pale Tarkot destroyed the Darrowhill Waystation in a psychotic rage, Melia Thames was among the dead. Her brother Serix was deeply affected.

Updated on 31 Jul 2012 by SFletcher

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2012-04-13 13:37:52: SFletcher created the card Way Station Massacre

2012-04-13 13:38:31: SFletcher edited Way Station Massacre

by M_Houlding:

I suggest taking off the targeting so that folks can cast this without targets. Or target an opponent.

"Target opponent sacrifices three nonbasic lands. CARDNAME deals 3 damage to each creature."

by SFletcher:

Well played.

2012-04-13 15:55:20: SFletcher edited Way Station Massacre

by Bombshell:

I'd take the last sentence off of the flavor text. We need to show how this is a moment for Serix, not tell. Players will figure it out.

by M_Houlding:

Even excising that sentence it's very flat.

And maybe change the name to something like "Massacre at Darrowhill". It'd be a good companion to Burning of Xinye.

2012-04-15 16:10:01: SFletcher edited Way Station Massacre

2012-07-31 23:38:09: SFletcher edited Way Station Massacre

by dude1818:

It reads like an obituary.

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