Neat!

Thank you! got the idea from Naban, Dean of Iteration and Teysa Karlov

Yeah, Wizards has been printing a lot of this effect lately.

I personally love it, Naban especially feels super useful for an archtype we've had forever! Teysa is cool too, but lots of tokens already have both. I'd play her anyways tho :P

The wording is wrong (it confusingly resembles a triggered ability, which it isn't), although the effect would work. See the cards linked in comment 104101 for the correct wording, please.

It is still wrong; it should probably say something like "If you draw a card besides the first card drawn each turn and drawing that card causes a triggered ability of a permanent you control to trigger..." (The use of the word "whenever" makes it seem like this ability is a triggered ability too, which it isn't; if it were, the timing wouldn't work properly.)

Thanks for your patience, it seems my reading comprehension skills have gotten a lot weaker since school ended!