see Selfless Traitor

you used the wrong brackets for the callout.

I'm not thinking I like this punishing-itself thing, seems much more black. Also if this is supposed to be kind of like Selfless Traitor then it should be //.

This is a fine blue card, so if you just plan for this to make sense in isolation, i'd just advise to ignore the callout, even with similar mechanics, different archtypes. It's notable i suppose.

I do actually liek this card.