The first ability says only one land can enter each turn, so the triggered ability will never happen. Is this all supposed to be one big ability? I'd get rid of the first sentence then, and say "If a nontoken land would enter the battlefield under an opponent's control except the first one they play during their turn, instead exile it and you put a Forest land token onto the battlefield tapped." a la Notion Thief. I also was to point out that land tokens seem like a terrible idea, since most people use dice and it's impossible to tell if they're tapped. I also don't see this doing anything for you, since people just won't play ramp if this is out.
So let me get this straight. You can't play a second land from your hand. But if one happens to enter on the battlefield... let's say via Ruin Ghost activation... then you exile it, etc., etc.. Am I reading this card right?
The first ability says only one land can enter each turn, so the triggered ability will never happen. Is this all supposed to be one big ability? I'd get rid of the first sentence then, and say "If a nontoken land would enter the battlefield under an opponent's control except the first one they play during their turn, instead exile it and you put a Forest land token onto the battlefield tapped." a la Notion Thief. I also was to point out that land tokens seem like a terrible idea, since most people use dice and it's impossible to tell if they're tapped. I also don't see this doing anything for you, since people just won't play ramp if this is out.
Error on my part, I need to put the opponent clause into the second sentence. The card isn't intended to give its controller any drawback.
So let me get this straight. You can't play a second land from your hand. But if one happens to enter on the battlefield... let's say via Ruin Ghost activation... then you exile it, etc., etc.. Am I reading this card right?
This was going to be red until I felt that retrace would be really cool to add to this card.
Oh. Hmm. Perhaps, "At the beginning of your end step, if ~ is the only spell you cast this turn..."
I don't understand the trigger here. You seem to be missing some words.
Creepy flavor.
dropped cost from
Lonely's design space is much more narrow than I anticipated.
This former knight became a farmer.