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I think a 6/5 here would be too weak, compare Ball Lightning, which will always wait until after combat to die. Maybe 7/5?
If you want to truly optimize the word count at this point, you're probably better doing it in MSE to get it exact.
That's a much better number of words. I'd suggest removing one or two from the flavour text (maybe "courts of" or "burning") to try to get it down to 2 lines, but that's your call.
Looks a little bit too strong. I think for 4 mana, 6 power would be about right. Yes, sometimes it'll malfunction and do nothing at all (unless you have a Veteran Armorer or Crimson Acolyte), but sometimes it'll get to attack, hastily, for rather more than would be fair.
Is this balanced?
Looking at Warp World, you're right.
I feel like it might be "Then each player."
Oops, yes, that's hard. The wording is really similar to Warp World, and that's already too wordy for a card despite being fairly simple.
I almost wish there was an ability word for "that X's controller sacrifices it, then reveals cards from the top of their library until they reveal an X card. They put that OTB and the rest on the bottom in any order".
You can make some minor savings. I think "all lands" is better than "each land" here. Leave out "under his or her control", I think that's the default now. "then shuffles the rest into his or her library" is slightly shorter than "on the bottom in any order". But I think that still leaves it too long.
I tried removing all the "each player" and changing all the pronouns to "you" and adding a "then each player does the same" at the end, but it wasn't shorter.
You may have to abandon this idea as much as I like it -- if it doesn't fit, it doesn't matter how good it is. Or maybe something like, "exile all lands, then each player puts X of them OTB at random where X was the number of lands they controlled exiled this way"? That has a similar idea, it will play rather differently.