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CardName: Psychic Elite Cost: {2}{w}{U} Type: Creature - Syigen Psy Warrior Pow/Tgh: 1/1 Rules Text: Kinesis 2 (This creature enters the battlefield with two +1/+1 counters on it.) Remove a +1/+1 counter from Psychic Elite. Detain target creature. Flavour Text: Set/Rarity: Faction Wars: Ekho Uncommon

Psychic Elite
{2}{w}{u}
 
 U 
Creature – Syigen Psy Warrior
Kinesis 2 (This creature enters the battlefield with two +1/+1 counters on it.)
Remove a +1/+1 counter from Psychic Elite. Detain target creature.
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Updated 2 days ago by Tyrannaut

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2022-09-22 22:31:56: Tyrannaut created the card Psychic Elite
2022-09-22 22:52:11: Tyrannaut edited Psychic Elite
2022-09-23 02:28:00: Tyrannaut edited Psychic Elite

Ok I feel it is written well enough for feedback. Let me have it XD.

The issue here is that the effect "making it so that a single spell can't be countered" is too narrow. This whole mechanic does nothing if your opponent doesn't play counterspells.

I strongly assume that kinesis as is doesn't need a parameter.

I suggest adding another effect/benefit to the mechanic e. g. "can't be countered and costs {1} less to cast".

You want "mana value" rather than "mana cost".

Looking at the card as a whole... five mana for a 2/3 with a benefit that's worth less than {1} is very underwhelming - especially considering that kinesis does nothing unless you have additional mana to cast an instant or sorcery spell this turn.

This could cost {w}{u} and would still be nothing to write home about.

Thank you!

2022-09-23 16:07:30: Tyrannaut edited Psychic Elite

Ok round 2. 2nd idea. I am ready. XD Brief idea line of thoughts. Trying to make it were kinesis can be a resource to do abilities. Using the strength ans stamina of a creature instead of mana cost.

Why not "(This creature enters the battlefield with two +1/+1 counters on it.)", then?

I am not smart XD. You're right. That is better. I think I was reaching for that cool factor whatever that meant at the time. Lol. You're the best, you give great feedback. Thank you!

2022-09-24 12:02:27: Tyrannaut edited Psychic Elite

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